Sirence

Well I can’t speak for every woman but I certainly do have something like it

I’d say it’s plenty developed, it’s a natural thing after all that everyone has automatically, but I assume it’s just less talked about because as those comments show some men will immediately accuse them of ‘being dishonest about their own taste’ (for what gain?) just because they don’t happen to like the same things that men do.

The article completely drifts off. It doesn’t go into explaining the female gaze and why men have such a weirdly hard time wrapping their head around why women prefer different things than they do, but suddenly starts detailing how women are drilled into adjusting for the male gaze.

The comments are a riot too. Completely missing the point and claiming it’s the fault of the lightning in the right pic why women don’t like it. Spoiler alert: it’s not the lightning

If he’s already messy when he has to clean up his own mess there is a good chance he’ll devolve into a total slop the second he feels like he won’t have to deal with his own consequences anymore. I’d also recommend some written down outlines and I’d definitely add that deliberate cause messes are not in the scope and also nothing that could be considered harassment or a biohazard.
A surprising number of people that clean private homes have told me their clients would leave used condoms out for them to clean up and so you should make it clear stuff like that is unacceptable beforehand.

Young adult means the content is suited for a younger audience, it’s not an excuse for unintelligent writing void of anything of value.